Darkiplier X Child Reader: Moments

"The chapters' lengths are fine, but you can improve on your writing. It's boring and random. I'm just confused. There are no children who read this so just do "Darkiplier X Antisepticeye" okay? You seemed like you actually tried revising your grammatical errors, but can you please revise them because without them, the story wouldn't be so confusing. You can have grammatical errors but don't make the story confusing with them. Here's an example of a non-confusing sentence with grammatical errors: Fak, Fuc me weinr sed the squireel underr te tree. He was blue miutated, squirrell who was goin to dei of cancer. Here's an example of a confusing sentence with grammatical errors: The pig was at the hotdog stand and the people were tying him in an quart becaus he lived on. Roof."