What is your opinion?
King Without a Queen
"over all the concept of the story was GREAT. the way it was written was... well it left a little to be desired and confused the readers frequently. between the grammaical errors, the punctuation, and the flipping around willy nilly from place to place and timeperiod to time period it would get VERY confusing. this book should have been written in actully 3 books (or sections). the first book being written about Chandra's life and her murder, leaving it at her murder but not who did it. the second book you bring in Pheobe. now you can connect the dots cleary between Pheobe and her past life with Chandra not leaving the reader confused. you can introduce dreams and all the back and forth and the interactions between them.. in the 3rd book you can delve into the murder part of it and let the reader find out who put the curse on Silik and who murdered him. this would allow for more continuity and less confusion. two apps called grammerly and spell check will solve your other problems quite easily."
Good book
"The grammar though"
The King without a Queen
"Very different story. Liked it a lot can’t wait to read more "
The King Without a Queen
"Good book. Would have liked more at the end. She was a pretty smart girl even though she didn’t remember anything "
Wow.
"I loved every minute of this book."
i like the story
"i like the story"
Loved it
"Amazing is all I can say "
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"Needs more sexual tension but I like the story."
Love it
"Love it good biok"
The king without a queen
"So far so good"
Awesome!!
"Awesome!! I get a little confused ast times but overall I'm loving the book!!"
The king without a queen
"This story is so good and so funny I can't wait to read the next story. Great work!!"
A king without a queen
"I love this book this really really nice. But the author has some grammatical issues "
The King Without A Queen
"I enjoyed the story and the only problem is the grammar but unfortunately I was able to understand it. Thank you author💕"
I don't remember
"It's very good I love it but some of the grammar is hard to read"
The King without a Queen.
"Very interesting and nice use of words. "
Light & nice
"Story was nice and light! "
The bestt
"I liked this wholeeeeeeee book and when it comes to disliking...HAAAH what is that?? I have forgotten the word "dislike" since i've started reading this book"
The King Without A Queen
"This is a really amazing novel I have read this for so long and it gets reallt interesting please when you have the chance get this book published."
Really enjoyed reading this novel ❤️
"Love your novel 😍 and can't wait to read more of your novels 😍"
