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This is amazing!

"This short poem is quite amazing for many reasons. Not only is it relatable for many people, but it is deep. Keep doing what you're doing. 😁"

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Short but Powerful

"Sometimes, we don't need long and extravagant pieces to convey meaning, and this does a great job at showing that. It starts off sweet, innocent. And leaves you with a sad feeling, one that many of us may be familiar with. I know I am."

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