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I like it. Waiting for the shoe to fall

"Thus starts out with a tragedy and then another tragedy. It the mean time life us happening or not. The question that we are asking is,is tragedy going to happen again? Will the young people and the people of earth make it? Why do they have water and electricity? How does God play in this? I'm staying tuned so should you."

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Great writing

"Really enjoying this book. The characters are deep and real. The “acid” is an interesting twist. And what Father Barry said in this last chapter has really got me thinking about what that acid means. "

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Tears Fall

"I love this book the story the chapter of their own point of view I love the love story it's amazing!! I wish it was longer to keep reading! Love it! ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐"

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Tears Fall

"I really love this book! I cant wait to read more of it. I love how you are telling Jenna's and Logans story in one. Please hurry and update."

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Tears Fall

"It is sooo good!!!!!"

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Mind Blowing

"Wow. I didn’t know what it was about and figures it would be a cool thrilling sci-fi story with a bot of romance. Who would have thought it would be so deep and emotionally enthralling. It made me think and feel emotions I didn’t even know I could feel. All I’m saying is that it is truly a story to read!!"

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So good

"I love everything about this. "

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Tears Fall

"Amazing book, can't wait to read more. "

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Tears fall

"Overall everything is fantastic its hard to stop reading"

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Tears Fall

"Such a good book"

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Ashlynn

"I love this book and you should definitely keep writing it so please update the book soon because I don't think I can live without it"

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Tears Fall

"I hope there will be more soon. This is so worth reading. "

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Tears Fall

"I like the emotion put behind the two main characters and the fact that the author has one of them develop PTSD from the trauma of seeing her parents killed in front of her, which does really happen in life. The going from one point of view to the other for each character is good, it helps me see and experience each of their lives. Not finished yet, so I dont see the intended plot. I do see a good lead up to it though. I hope there is more detail about what these 'ships' are and who the attackers were. Keep it up. We are only as good as we see ourselves. "

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Tears falk

"Gawwwwd! One of the finest pieces ever!! Sooo heart-touching and feels soo real!!"

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Tears Fall

"This book has been one of few books that are truly exhilarating. I admire your extent to which you build your characters as well as giving us information on both the feeling and experiences Jenna and Logan experience. You are extremely talented and this is an amazing read. Please write more I am really looking forward to it"

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Tears Fall

"Amazing story please write more!!!"

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Tears fall

"Very good Nice plot Great character development Keep on writing. "

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It’s great!

"It’s great!"

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Well written

"I am enjoying this and I'm only on chapter 2. Very good job so far. I do not always rate so early but you deserve the 5 stars plus. Keep up the great work!"

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Tears Fall

"This has been such a refreshing read! It’s difficult for me to become engulfed in books with trite plots, and your book is the opposite. This one is new and exciting and I cannot wait to see where it goes! Well done 🤗 keep up the good work!"

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