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Under His Watchful Eye - Rewriting

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Summary

Katie was a paycheck to her mother. At this point in her life, she was use to being unloved. That is until her stepdad comes into her life completely obsessed with her. What do you do when no one value's you?

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
1
Rating
5.0 1 review
Age Rating
18+

Rewriting

Hello all,

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I re-read this story and I found it horribly depressing and did not like the tone of it. I will be rewriting it and once completed I will post the full story. For those of you that have read it, please let me know you honest opinion. I would really like to know, good or bad. Thank you for taking the time to read this! I am rewriting this so its better for everyone :D

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Are you enjoying my ongoing story? Please let me know what you think by leaving a review! Thanks, Gates of Echos

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Profound

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Heartwarming

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Shocking

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Good Writing

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Compelling Plot

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Great Character

Strong Dialog

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Strong Dialog

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it was depressing, but some people like that shit. but anyway, i cant wait for the book to be posted!

6 years

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