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"I love it!!!!!!!! "

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Mona

"Loved loved loved thos story!!! Very interesing, thank you author❤️"

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Brave New World

"The book was really amazing. Is wrote in a diary way but an amazing one. You see how Reyna grows and learns and experience the magic world. The book haves this crazy plot that I didn’t see coming. If you want to read fantasy with a little bit of drama this is the book for you."

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Brave new world

"I love this book very interesting and detaling they told her name reyna who she was the topic everything amazing keep writting books u will become a famous wrtter gives detail very amazing u dont copy to me this is a oringal copy that u wrote love it keep up the work "

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Utterly Enrapturing!

"I loved this story! The plot was wonderful and had a good few twists that I wasn't expecting. Not once did I ever predict what might happen next. The characters all had issues that definitely made them more human (or not ;P) and made for a great read. It all blended together nicely. If there was one thing I absolutely had to criticize it would be that it could be a bit more descriptive. Personally, if I can't imagine myself being the situation then it's harder to read the story properly. All in all, though, I loved reading this and am aching for more!"

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The storyline was well constructed and the characters were compelling with each chapter. A rivoting read to the end. Anticipating the next book..

"I liked the way the characters kept each chapter interesting. However grammatically, it was a bit hard to follow at times I would recommend this novel, to all fantasy buffs. I personally rated this novel on it's characters, content and found it a magical read. Quickly write book 2 please.. "

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Loving this story

"Waiting for her to become more powerful than him"

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Brave New World

"I loved this book! It was interesting and heartwarming and I just loved the characters. The main character isn’t whiny or self-centered, I truly enjoyed the character development throughout the book. I look forward to the next book."

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I love it

"I'm not finished with this yet but I can honestly say I love your writing style. It is refreshing to read. I also love Reyna's spunky attitude."

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Brave new world

"It was one of the best novels I have read. I read it in a couple days. She no doubt will one day be comparable to the likes of Stephen King and Robert Mc Gammon. I believe this author could be a very famous author with the right reviews. I thoroughly enjoyed this story and I can barely wait for a spin off. There has to be a part 2...🤗"

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Brave New World

"I really enjoyed this book and look forward to reading more."

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Loved it!!❤

"I loved this book, with her spunky personality and powerful magic, even her sexuality helped to bond me to Reyna❤"

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Brave new world

"I thought the story was really good and well written. I liked the characters, the narrative and especially the storyline. It was awesome! "

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Interesting!

"So far the novel has been interesting, entertaining and unique. I would highly recommend it to anyone who is new to the fantasy genre or the plot of sorcery! 9/10 would recommend👍🏻😁"

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Beautiful character development

"Creating a character is not the easiest task, especially one that the reader can instantly connect to on an emotional level. This author was able to do just that. It didn't take long for me to connect with Reyna, the main character, and, to be honest, she drove my interest more than the plot. The storyline was magnificent, but I found myself continuing to read because I cared about Reyna, and that's an amazing accomplishment for an author. Well done! "

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Wow

"I've only read up to the sixth chapter, but I must say this is absolutely amazing! Reyna is so cute! Don't know where the story will lead yet but I will continue to read this story until the end. Lovely job ^_^"

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Unexpected surprise

"Interesting to read about other creatures and there behaviours "

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Brave New World

"Great write up Keep it up"

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