What is your opinion?
Review of Trip in Time
"This story did give an idea of what it could be like if you wanted and had the ability to travel back in time. It shows strong female power with the ability to have romance in the mix too. I loved how the story played out and the ending was perfect."
Loved the re-write.
"I see that the story was updated and I like this rewrite better. You can see where the character depth has been added and the story has developed more. I enjoyed reading this again because it was different now. Lily shows as a strong women and lets people know that they can't hold back."
A Trip in Time
"I really enjoyed this story. I was able to get into the plot with Lily and showing how much she goes through to get in the end. I look forward to any of books you create."
A Good Read
"You can see how the story can still continue to grow with character development. This was a quick read for me, I was able to get through it in a few hours. I do see the potential for the story to still grow and some of the supporting characters being able to get more of a background that gives them development."
A Trip in Time
"Loved the twist in the plot. I was waiting for her to choose Phillip and my heart was broken, but the come back was great. Although, I think a little more physical descriptions of characters and setting, place, time. will enhance the story. The woman in the medieval time but out of century thinking was a nice change also, along with the prince's show of character in him standing with her. a few grammar items to be polished but hey we all have these issues as writers. generally a refreshing read. keep going."
