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😖Rejection Number Three

"🚫Don't bother, is 1page🚫 Too bad, the teaser was really interesting, oh well😮‍💨"

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Distracted by poor grammar

"It's hard to follow because of the poor grammar. I highly suggest that the author grab a few grammar and sentence construction lessons. Also, proper punctuation is paramount."

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