Intriguing

"The story drew me in instantly. I felt drawn to the two main characters. Since there were only two chapters to read, I couldn't give a 5 star rating on the plot, however, The pace of the story was good and the intense feelings of love and loss were excellently portrayed. I saw some typos which could be easily corrected. Overall, the story has the power to pull you in. I want to know what happens next. Thanks."