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haters or lovers /a jonah marais fanfic

Summary

I love her, she's my everything,but everything that we have can get fucked up... I love jonah so much i can't explain how much i love him i just wish he knew how much my heart aches for him

Status
Ongoing
Chapters
44
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

chapter 1 <3

A/N: hi there, when i first wrote this story, i was 14 back in 2018. i am now 19 and i have cringed at what i have written but bear in mind i was a literal child who wanted to do what everyone else was doing and i was deep into the WDW fandom. i have an emotional attachment to this book which makes me not want to delete it and ive been putting it off for years. however, i will be going through all the chapters and change everything that seems way too much but i dont really want to make drastic changes because this story was all that i loved.

thank you and enjoy.


jordan's p.o.v

"so i'm really happy to go to a new college especially with you." jonah said while i blushed "awww is little jords blushing? she looks really cute" he said in a baby voice i again blushed.

i responded with "so what am i not allowed to blush? and yes i'm happy to start a new college maybe i can make new friends and you'll be all alone."

jonah pretended to faint i ofc caught him cause i didn't want him to hurt himself. he hugged me tight and said "don't leave me i love you." i hugged him even tighter and said "never. i love you more."

my phone started buzzing which made us break the hug, i answered it without looking and all i could hear was a women shouting at me then i realised that it was my mum i looked at the time "7:30pm." "shit i'm dead."

i told jonah that i have to go home he looked at me with puppy eyes and i couldn't stop looking at them so i gave him a kiss on the cheek and he shouted saying "JORDAN SUMMERS KISSED ME!!" i laughed and ran all the way back home, i flung open the door ignoring my angry mum.

i went upstairs and stared into the ceiling thinking about how in a few hours i'll be starting a completely different college with the boy i grew up with. i finally stopped daydreaming and looked at the time "12:00am." "SHIT.” “i need to sleep." and i slowly closed my eyes and started dreaming again. hopefully tomorrow will be good, nothing can go wrong, right?

DID U LIKE IT? damn im cringing while editing this.

19 year old me is still cringing till this day.

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hi thanks for your sweet words, unfortunately i wrote this fanfic when i was 14 years olds and now im 20, i don’t have any plan to turn it into a comic because that would mean to actually finish the story and i have no ideas for it at all since it was written by me at 14
thank you,
layba

10 months

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