Inkitt
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Heart-pounding start!

"What a talent this writer has for description! Every detail leaves the reader fully satisfied and engulfed, but the intriguing plot...keeps you wanting more!!! The story is unique, and I think brings a whole new perspective to the family's culture and religion that is not seen in the horror genre (not that I've seen). I really hope this writer finishes this novel because I will definitely be reading it! Pacing, and dialogue are nicely done too."

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Great Start!

"I found this very easy to read, and I mean that in the best way possible! I always struggle with trying to sound mature in my writing without getting TOO poetic and fancy. The plot is very enticing as well as a new twist to horror!"

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Hell on Earth

"I really enjoyed reading your story. I'm not that big on horror when it comes to watching a movie but I love a good horror story that I can follow along with my imagination and picture the setting and emotions of the characters. I also realized that I'm more wordy with my writing and focus so much on my audience in making sure I don't lose them with my writing but in reading your material, I was able to follow it very smoothly. Thank you for sharing your hard work and I wish you all the best. It is truly wonderful."

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