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This is an amazing book

"I love this book "

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Easy read but certain situations can get under your skin

"I honestly enjoyed this story about Kelly and you get to know the other characters very well. You will hate Megan with a passion! but enjoy reading the Brandon’s. The and the cover doesn’t fit this story but it certainly doesn’t keep you from reading the story because it nicely pulls you in 😊👍🏽. "

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Tammy

"Great work so far. Couple errors but the interesting plot makes up for it. Would love some more plot twists but apart from that just keep up the good work"

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Good book

"I enjoyed this 👌"

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"You will be addicted with this superb story! You can publish it on NovelStar, just submit your story to [email protected] or [email protected]"

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hey baby girl

"i loved your boook... the outline was awesome and i wish for more books like this"

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Peekapooka

"Totallycomplex. Theater make up was well used as a plot point If you want a fairly twisted story .read this."

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I really like the book and i really want to know whats ganna happen to megan since she's no more going to military school

"I really hated when Megan bullied Kelly it made me realize that isn't a solution but creating more problems she should have just told Kelly what was the matter but I'm not saying it's her fault but she should have at least try and confront her I know it wouldn't have been that easy instead of bully her "

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Inexplicable

"I have no words to describe how I feel right now....Good going Writer! "

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Good

"I didn't know Kelly's dad ran off with Megan's mom oh boy and its getting good with Alex and o planning to get Megan back i hope ..Kelly doesn't get in trouble for megan"

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It's breathtaking

"The story contains every type of emotions. You name it and it's there. I read many books. Either I but them or online, I have never cried reading one. But, this one broke my record😅. I'm loving it so far. "Hey baby girl" is not a thing, it's an emotion, to which I'm so much attached. Hope you will do great in future."

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Hey Baby Girl

"This author is really talented and she gifted and very talented, her books create really good tension and she writes books in detail. Mashallah shes really good"

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Hey baby girl.

"Absolutely great book. This book needs to be updated.🧐🧐. Please look into that more. "

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Hey baby girl

"I love the characters well except for Megan and Julian.I just wish Kelly could use her karate experience on Megan so that she can stop the bullying."

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Hey baby girl

"I’m really hard to convince that books are good but this one is amazing I love it 🥰 "

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Oh god no, Juliiaaaaannnnnnn!!!!

"I am actually like so scared right now, like a cliff, chicken factory?! Spooky!!! Like, please, this can't be it.😶"

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Goodddd

"I really like how detailed the story is and the storyline is also super awesome I hope you continue writing! "

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Great

"Love the writing style and I think I saw a free grammatical errors but other than that it’s amazing "

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It's great💜🐞

"Update pls😭😭😭😭"

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Hey Baby girl

"So far, so good. Can't wait to read more of it! Although I'd like to hear how Kelly's mom is doing. There hasn't been any mention of her ever since she left for Kenya if I'm not mistaken. But overall, this is exactly the type of book I'd been searching for so long!! Nothing exaggerated, everything is natural. Thanks so much for creating this piece of gem!"

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