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Amazing story telling

"Expertly written, beautiful words. Unexpected ending...had me crying at 1 am. Hope you keep writing."

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Hope, love and tears

"Very good read. It felt like I was living inside the story. Full of emotions and pain drama and plot twist at the end was almost unbearable. Keep up the good work Thank you M "

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Emotional

"Very emotional ❤️ I don't want to spoil anything, so, I'll stick with this ❤️💔😭🥺❤️❤️❤️"

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An amazingly written artwork

"This story was a roller coaster ride from start to finish and I always come back to read when I just need that little something to get me in my feels. AMAZING!!"

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"This is the first ever story here in inkitt that i have rated 5 star even though i have absolutely hated this kind of ending in stories. This story made me feel all kinds of emotions, a roller coaster. I hate the ending, i knew from the start who shes going to end up with so having that kind of ending is dissapointing. But i love it, i love how this makes it so real. Thank you for sharing your story author. "

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Enticing a

"I'm so wrapped up in allie's love life!! I'm eager to find out what happens next! "

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Common Grounds: Beautiful

"I love the story very much. It took me emotionally, tragic but strong. I don't know how to describe it. I love to read it again and again"

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"Wow, this book had me on a rollercoaster ride , in the best way possible. A great read.😊 "

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Heartbreaking and Enlightening

"The roller coaster of emotions that the writer so expertly expressed was a blessing. The plot was so very well planned and the plot twists were unbelievable. The writer expressed the protagonist's emotions In very well put words. Though the end was unexpected and earth shattering,it was also enlightening and meaningful. Lots of love to the author. 😘"

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A fantastic, heartbreaking book

"This book is a reality check for everyone. Loved every bit of it."

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Well written but will break your heart

"Like I said this will break your heart The feeling like "How am I gonna move on?" :'((((((("

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WOW!!

"I'll say it again...WOW! So, I'm a book nerd and I have to say hands down this is one of the best books I've read in a while! It had me all up in my feels. I felt like I was pulled into the pages and living it right there with Allie. I believe that this book deserves to be published! I would most definitely buy it. "

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Real nice

"I was expecting the typical story but am happy to say it’s not. Loved every part of it. I also loved that you didn’t write an epilogue as to show what others got in few years time. You just left it like that. Not saying it’s bad. Overall I’m pleased to say it’s a unique story and a beautiful one. "

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Adored

"The author has found such a brilliant way to go at the perfect speed of development throughout this story. You become enthralled, you fall in love, you build friendships, and you learn how to grieve. You adore every part of it. Wonderful!"

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I love and hate tragedies

"And this story is one that really broke my heart. Such a good read, also, some people at the dorm might think I am going crazy because I am crying at one in the morning."

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Ssssz

"She should hav had a happy ending......"

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Common Grounds

"This is hart breakingly beautifully written. I loved the authors easy writing style; leaving the reader's mind swirling way past the end of the book. Life isn't always fair, but it still is beautiful. "

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Crying

"I loved it!"

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Red and puffy

"Wow... This was beautifully written all throughout. I hope Allie found closure. I was glad to see character development and proper grammar/ punctuation. Bad idea to read the end at work though. Was serving sandwiches with a red and puffy face; certain I put off some customers. 😋"

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Common Grounds

"Good book, nicelywritten, simple plot and characters, enjoyable to read but sadly it ended with tears in my eyes"

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