Back to Story

Average Ratings

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation

What is your opinion?

Vixcee

"The story I felt was not really a novella. It didn't do the story justice. It needed to be rounded out. I enjoyed it, but it needed more. "

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Lycan lover

"I am loving this story so far.Thank you."

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Cute short story

"Short story but very cute. Could be expanded to explain some things better or a new book about her parents or the daughter. But overall a good story. Keep writing."

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Nice story line

"Nicely done "

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Lycan Lover

"All in all I thought this was a good story. I thank you so much for writing this short story. It did hold my interest. It had funny and serious times.😊❤️😊"

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Likable characters

"Enjoyable plot"

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Lyrics lovers

"This was a really good book and you need to update it so I can know what happened to them and the baby and her friends and family"

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
,

"Keep up the good work! You can publish it on NovelStar, just submit your story to [email protected] or [email protected]"

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Good short story

"Good plot line and quick character build "

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Lycan love

"I love that the story was straight to the point evening thought it was a bit confusing with the point if views but it was awesome keep it up"

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
1234wac

"I hope they get bck together. I like them as a couple "

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Good

"Some spots didn't make sense. Since I am used to writing like this I could read. what it was supposed to say. If I knew people who would read this I would tell them about it."

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Like what I'm reading

"I like the story and plot so far. However, trying to keep up with who the "I" is is somewhat confusing. I had to keep going back to reread once I figured out which character the "I" was referring to. Other than that, I'm really enjoying reading this story."

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Lycan Lover

"I loved it! It was a complete story rapped in a small amount of chapters! I couldn't put it down! Loved the characters of Lisa and Dave, even Caine, Lisa's Dad reminded me of my own. I would recommend this story to anyone who likes to read these types of stories!"

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Forgot the title

"Its is a nice story"

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Beautiful novel 😍😍

"I really enjoyed reading your novel 👌 it was really good 😊 and I can't wait to read more of your novels 😍"

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Lycan Lover

"Beautiful story"

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Love monster

"Perfect love story"

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
I like it a lot.

"I like this book because of the happy ending. It ISvery interesting plot which made me to keep reading and I finished the book so quickly that even my self got surprise."

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Lycan lover

"Nice story line,simple language and good use of language too.in all very good book"

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation