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Unapproachable Desires

"I loveeeee✨"

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Unaprochable desires

"It's amazing. The way that the cliff hangers just jump in is perfect, and the sentimentality is genius. The last ending so far was... Indescribable."

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Vampires have so many superpowers yet they can't win from humans. Unrealistic plot, even fantasy wise.

"Grammer Repetition of sentences So many plot mistakes like vampire altering vampires' memories. "

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