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Suffering

"Great characters with lots of evil villains. Good flowing story with close escapes Totally enjoyed"

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Peter

"Love it so far, great character development "

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Good

"The plot is well writing. Also, the situation, however the grammar during the story so far is a 4 out of ten vocabulary. I think you should use more suspensive words "

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