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Help me, it Hurts.

"It was a great read. I hate how it left me hanging. I want a Part 2. "

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Help me, it hurts

"Grammar isn't the best, but I can still understand what the author is saying."

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Best story ever

"Can't wait for more "

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Love it!

"Absolutely one of my favorites. "

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Love this story!!

"I’ve loved this story so far. Can’t wait to read more!!! "

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Great

"It's a good story it makes mee feel all the emotions I have to feel happiness sadness madness"

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I absolutely love this book! Defenetly a book I’ll recomend for friends! Keep going, i need more of this book!

"I really liked this book, because it is the type of book I like. I like to read about girls/boys go through their tough times, and how they handle it. This girl really handler it well, and the Arthur did a great job! Keep going, this is AMAZING!! "

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Title

"I like the book. Some grammer, but I do it too. Yeah I don't know what else. "

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Good story

"I love the characters, plot and story so far. It has me intrigued and hoping for the next chapter. I also love the way it's written and gives the sense of dread yet hope for the future of the main character."

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Help me it hurts

"I really enjoyed reading this book. I do hope to see more updates on it as I think it's been written excellently "

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Love it

"Awesome book. I love Andy and how she turned her life around. It's really good. Definitely reccomend."

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Help Me, It Hurts

"I love this book and I love how Ally went form no one caring about her, getting abused, and betrayed by one of her friends, to be loved and cared for by strangers she never thought she could trust and eventually finding her true love"

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Wow

"Well written, cute af, where is the next chapter PLEASE?"

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Nice story

"It was overall heartbreaking so far, but I'm getting eased up. Good work, indeed."

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Help me, it hurts

"Plz continue this story it is AMAZING I have been addicted to it"

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Way to go!

"I really like how realistic it is with the trauma not just magically getting over it. Your writing style makes it feel like something I'd check out from the library. Keep up the good work!"

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So far amazing!!!

"I am loving this story so far. Hope to have updates soon "

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Interesting

"I like it.. Quite my type"

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Love it

"This book has had me hooked from the beginning. Cant wait to finish it "

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Strong Story

"You really have a strong story, but you need to put more details about her feelings and her thoughts, about their features, and about everything. The chapters are too small. You have to develope everbody's personality in a way that the reader feels part of there life and everyday moments. You can use the sexual abuse to send a message that would help people. But your story is really strong. Thank you."

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