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Make you want more

"I would recommend reading this book, it is suspenseful,erotic and heartwarming. The author has a very good writing style and knows how to make you want more. "

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Bartered slavery

"Great story with believable characters and a well written plot "

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One of the best

"This is amazing. Worth a reread. At first I thought it would be another cliche story about slave master relationship. But I’m in awe, this story is refreshing and unique. You know how to appeal emotions to the reader, I goes from hating Hans to understanding him. I thought Rosa would be a hurdle in the future, when I realize it’s the end. Nevertheless I enjoyed every chapter and did not feel like you’re dragging some parts, something I don’t like to other stories in Inkitt. Keep writing author! "

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Great read

"This book is not for everyone as there is dark themes.....but it really is a wake up call on human trafficking and it's prevalence.....I loved it though...had my emotions of hatred, love , anger ...etc ...running wild.. a beautiful well written story"

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The master of henhofen

"Simply an amazing book"

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Bartered slavery

"Hope to read more"

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Another well written story

"Freekin love it! "

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Good

"V v v v v v v v v v v v v v good"

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Bartered slavery

"This book is amazing! Your writing is amazing! My emotions are all over the place! WOW! Just...WOW! "

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Bartered slavery

"I love/ed everything "

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Page turner

"Love the intense, dark and sensual sensuality. Compelling page turner and eye opener"

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Thoko

"Royal family and friends of mine is not there in present express my interest for the same to u and i"

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From a german reader

"I don t know, women also likes thes story. I like it. I would recommend a nativ german speeking should correct the german sentences. There a some faults in words and grammar. I think "Hans" isn t a situable name for a Baron. He could named like "Johannes", and short "Hans". Thank you and best regards Reinhard "

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Bartered slavery

"Awesome entertainment thank you!!"

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Bartered slavery

"This book is well written. I actually some times agree with the slave trader. I love how you show both sides of the coin on a very frightening issue in 2days society."

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Bartered slavery

"At first I wasn't sure if I wanted to read more after the first chapter.. but I felt like I was going to regret knowing what happened... Story line was great twisted and extioc for sure!"

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Bartered Slavery

"Well done! Strong story, very well thought out. "

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Very enjoyable. I just couldn't stop reading

"Very nice, just what I have always wanted and I couldn't stop reading"

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Excellent

"Incredibly well researched and well written"

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Bartered slavery

"Love the happy ending"

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