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"This story is well crafted, the details are authentic and the child's voice comes over well, in a breathless spilled out confessional tone. The plot develops well, it's signposted clearly (a little too clearly for me personally but that's not a fault that's my personal taste) and at the same time the events are unexpected. I look forward to more from Larraine."

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