Immortal and the seven deadly sins
"I bought books one and two and I can't wait to get the rest! What I love about this book series is that it has the right mixture of mystery, romance and sexy to it, that makes me anxious to read, in a sense "see" what happens next... But what I feel you should keep in mind while writing this amazing series, is that you're talking about God' creatures made in his image, human or not to do his will; His children, so see yourself in a father's eyes in real life, would you think he would like his children disrespecting him like that it's like calling your father by his first name and refusing to call him father or Dad. But all the other curse words are no problem for they are common, not disrespectful to the person so to speak, but to the dumb things they do, or say. Like shorthand it's short but to the point, without so many words to be said." I've noticed a lot of missing words and misused words along with words backwards in sentences that's why I gave the grammar rating such a low number of stars not saying it's bad I know it gets exciting when writing you want to get it all wrote down, before you forget it but don't forget to give it a second time over, once you do get it down... What I would like to see in the series is more humor... I would recommend this book my friend Trina who is also an aspiring writer and Love's all kinds of books mostly science fiction and vampire books like you write and I know she would enjoy them as much as I do. 😊🥰"