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Good read!!!!

"Good job this is a great read, I’m recommending this to my friends I’m just amazed in the maturity of the book. This book is like fine wine👍🏽👍🏽"

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Vitality is about over coming challenges

"In this story, there was some fun humor as well as unusual moments of pure happiness & peace even amidst a difficult journey of the main character in his fight for life. This young author (HS age)has a lot of potential especially if he learns to prof read before posting. That being said, I enjoyed the short story. "

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Fun

"Really love the plot and I like his writing style, always found it to be funny especially in a suspenseful book. I'd say other than the grammar, its a good one. It says in his bio he's in high school though so I'm not crazy picky. If your looking for a quick adventure book, this took me about a day to read. Fun and all around good read"

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ehh

"I enjoyed reading it but not a fan of the style of writing and the flow of the story."

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