What is your opinion?
Interesting Good Read
" I like your story. It is an interesting read. I love that the personalities of the characters are greatly shown. Your writing style hook me. There are a few punctuation errors and some minor grammar errors. But all in all I enjoyed reading your story. Keep writing and I wish you all the best! "
The Geeky Boy and the Popular Girl
"Title: The Geeky Boy and the Popular Girl The title says a lot about the story and as a reader, this is a typical plot to approach. However, as a writer, I always believe that every writer has a new and fresh take on a typical to out of the box plot. With regards to the cover of this book, it’s quite simple and clear. Of course, there is always room for improvement within the writing and designing world. Blurb After reading the blurb, I had a change in perspective on the approach to this story. It confirms what I always believe, as explained above about every writer. I like the twist to this story. I do think there should have been a bit less information, taking out a few lines in the blurb, leaving the reader to be flushed with questions as to what’s next in the book. Chapters Punctuation is needed, for instance, a few sentences which are long and using commas will help. When voicing the character’s thoughts, have it separate from the descriptive paragraphs just as you would for the character’s speech. The first chapter is quite interesting. From a reader’s perspective, I am intrigued to know the connection between the characters and why is Roxane popular yet alone? As a writer, it’s good to have the audience engaged and asking questions. It will allow them to flip the page and read further. In the second chapter, I enjoyed the character’s view on seeing someone for the first time and having an opinion until you look further and that opinion suddenly changes. I found that the story needed more information about the characters’ lives, their views and more substance. As I read, I am envisioning the story like a movie scene hence I found the lack of information about the characters to be prominent. There was one noticeable vocabulary and spelling error. The chapter length is good, not too long nor short. I honestly like Preston’s view on the story and the way he sees Roxane compared to others. Overall, I am interested to see where this story goes. There is work to be done, however, it was a delight reviewing."
