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Dream land

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Summary

Annabell wells sent to the hospital 21:00 from a stroke she is now in a coma no clue when she will wake up Dr.Grams said. I wake up but I can’t move. I hear but I can’t see. All I know is i'm in a hospital before I go back to the darkness that welcomes me. This time I wake up and slowly I adjust my eyes to the light I notice I don't see or hear anyone (odd) . As I get up from the hospital bed I walk around I again notice how quit it is and how I see nobody not even in the waiting room. No doctors nothing, which if you have EVER been to a hospital that's odd. As soon as I walk out the door it looks like i'm in a different galaxy. I walk over to a person ( I guess you can qualify it's a person they look odd though). I ask where am why does it look so different from california? The stranger just said “Well like you said it DOES look like were in a different galaxy he/she said”. And that's what had gotten me thinking am I in a different galaxy? Or even worse am I in a coma and this is a dream?

Status
8yrs ago
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1

Annabell wells sent to the hospital 21:00 from a stroke she is now in a coma no clue when she will wake up Dr.Grams said.


I wake up but I can’t move. I hear but I can’t see. All I know is i’m in a hospital before I go back to the darkness that welcomes me. This time I wake up and slowly I adjust my eyes to the light I notice I don’t see or hear anyone (odd) . As I get up from the hospital bed I walk around I again notice how quit it is and how I see nobody not even in the waiting room. No doctors nothing, which if you have EVER been to a hospital that’s odd. As soon as I walk out the door it looks like i’m in a different galaxy. I walk over to a person ( I guess you can qualify it’s a person they look odd though). I ask where am why does it look so different from california? The stranger just said “Well like you said it DOES look like were in a different galaxy he/she said”. And that’s what had gotten me thinking am I in a different galaxy? Or even worse am I in a coma and this is a dream?

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