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What is your opinion?

The rejection

"It’s ok so far but didn’t know it would stop so abruptly "

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The rejection

"Very interesting. I can't wait to read more. Please hurry. This could be very interesting."

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Super

"The story. I like the female alpha. She’s strong "

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emily

"He should be kicked ikt of the pack"

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Love it

"Love vinf it can't wait for more"

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The rejection

"Natasha is a whore and Julien a weak asshole.Kairi deserves better friends and a much better man"

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I love the story. .

"I love this story so far "

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Great so far

"I wish they would post the entire story"

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So far so good

"He should get kicked out of the pack!!! "

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So far so good

"So far good"

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The rejection

"Sounds good"

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The rejection

"I love everything about it. I was instantly drawn in and am eager to read more!"

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The rejection

"Update please "

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The Rejection

"I like the story but her mate is weak."

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Good

"It's good can't wait"

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Awesome awesome

"Awesome awesome awesome "

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Rejection

"I just wish it was a little bit longer"

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Excellent

"Love the sexual experience straight to the point, don't like the betrayal of her mater n bestie, reccomend to my reading buddies."

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The Rejection

"Is there more to this? Why only 3 chapters?"

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Love it

"Love it it’s awesome "

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