What is your opinion?
Review
"I quite enjoy what you have published, but I find it hard to understand the plot of the short story. I do read confusing things I often accidentally make them myself. Overall, if it wasn't for the plot, this would be a great story!"
Kafka-esque
"It would have been interesting to have known what your brief was in writing this story - you said that it had to be finished for work so I assume that it is something in connection with mental health. Whatever the reason, I was fascinated by the whole concept and the prose drew me along for its own sake, never mind what the end purpose was. I would be lying to say that I fully understood what the piece was really about but then, I often read stuff that I don't fully understand but that doesn't stop me totally enjoying the artifice that lies behind it. If there is any criticism it is that this piece still needs a final edit. The punctuation is a little awry in places and the odd word is interspersed where I believe a former editing process has left it. All in all, a good job and thoroughly engaging."
