I need to know what happens next!

"I went to this author's page to read a work they had suggested, but ended up clicking Flight of the Kestrel first, and I am so glad that I did. The first chapter really got me hooked. Their description of the city, and the way they weave the story and historical background in with the plot and dialogue is well done, and I found myself really rooting for Jorene. By the end of the first chapter I had no choice to click the second to find out what happened next, and by the end of the second I actually said, "Oh come on!" when it ended, because I was completely engrossed. I really hope the writer will keep working on this story in the future! My only critique as of now is that the second chapter needs another editing pass-through. There are spelling mistakes and missing words (more frequent as the chapter goes on, I bet they were writing it very eagerly!) but I could still understand what the sentences meant in every case, so nothing left me confused. Also, this isn't a problem in the first chapter at all, so please don't let that stop you from reading if you see this review! I would only suggest that the writer go back to chapter 2 and read through carefully again to correct some things. Overall, great work and I can't wait to see more of it! I'll be checking out the rest of your work next :)"