Inkitt
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Intriguing

"I thought the ending came up fast but that wasn't necessarily a bad thing. The story was short but straight to the point and It left some things up to the readers imagination. I enjoyed the subject matter and felt the writer did a good job of drawing me in and making me feel like I was there."

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Good

"The ending feels abrupt, however I like the open ending. I feel as though the meaning of the other person in the office will be different based on the reader feels about the entire situation. I have thought of at least three different things that could be going on alone myself."

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Rod Serling-esque

"If you're a sucker for "Twilight Zone" plots, you'll like the gentle chills this story has to offer. Just the right amount of creepiness without violence, with a positive resolution that, though somewhat sentimental, rings true."

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