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BEST!

"Loved the plot! The grovelling! And the ending"

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Maliha

"I have never written a review but this story was so captivating that I absolutely had to. An inspiring story about a young woman learning about who she is and the world around her. Maliha is such an empathetic and empowering character to read about, she’s very honest with herself and others and does what she feels is right for everyone. The author writes in such a way that you love all of the characters and the pieces of wisdom each persons truth offers will change your life . sooo …. ya gotta read this book :) "

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Amazing!!

"Just an amazing book to dive into! Love the culture, love, empowerment and character development was amazing. Definitely would recommend "

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Maliha

"This is one book I can never forget in my life It has a captivating plot❤️ Maliha is such a strong character❤️🎉🎉🎉🎉"

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Amazingly Riveting !!!

"I loved every moment of this adventurous and riveting book! "

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Maliha

"Really enjoyed this story, fantasy at its best"

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Maliha

"The alternative universe described is do amazing and the thoughts and feelings portrayed were really amazing. "

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Beautifully crafted

"The story was well-written and very descriptive when it came to the emotions of the characters. The writer is able to show character progression as the story goes on, keeping me hooked for more. Great read!"

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MALIHA

"The story was beautiful and i feel that it might even make a good movie. There were still typos and grammatical errors. Some sentences didn't make sense because of this but i slowly picked up what they meant after reading the succeeding paragraphs. The part where Maliha started liking Ray'et but suddenly went back to Ujarak i think needed to be elaborated more. Overall, this was a beautiful story and i didn't stop reading it as much as i can even when i was busy. "

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Fantastic, original and couldn't put it down

"Some spelling errors but overall amazing piece of fictional writing for those who enjoy a magical, spiritual, adventurous plot"

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GREAT READ!

"WOW!! If you are deciding on reading this book, GO FOR IT! I haven't read a book this well thought out in a while. The story line was very detailed and as they say, the plot thickens. In many ways this story is great. The way the auhor ties together Maliha's childhood, missing parents, and her journey to finding her true self is phenominal . I love this book. A new favorite of mine for sure. Here and there the writer left a few gramatical errors but this did not take away from the story."

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An amazing journey with lots of heart

"I dedicate this book my first review. The heroine of this story, Maliha, undergoes a wondrous journey in order to find that missing something which eludes even definition. Her magical adventure takes her not only to new geographical places but inner discovery as well. To love and loss and happiness. This version of the book is not perfect, it’s plagued with misspellings, syntax errors and misused words that seem to be autocorrect mishaps. But they can be ignored in light of the creativity and originality, the great rhythm in which the story is narrated and the depth of the characters, especially the heroine. The strength of fantasy fiction lies mostly in the reality of their characters and this author knows how to write great characters with tangible feelings and growth. The conflicts are credible and deep; and the lessons valuable."

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Maliha

"This was a fantastic read. Plenty of adventure, love and family. "

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Love this book

"Loved the characters and plot an amazing world to get lost in! Something's could be better explained like there are characters that are mentioned but not explained and when characters are speaking in another language its not translated. But as a whole this book is amazing and I could see it as a series!"

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Maliha

"I am in love with this book and everything about it. It is interesting from the very beginning and the storyline kept you on the edge of your seat the writing was extremely beautiful also. It was an overall great story."

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This is a MUST read

"The writing is amazing and the plot is the most impressive I have ever seen on this app, Wattpad, etc. "

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Maliha

"The author did a great job developing the characters. She used descriptive words to help me imagine the settings and how the characters looked. "

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MALIHA

"I like how the author wrote the story. The flow of thoughts in every scene took you inside the story, feel how the characters felt and see what they see. "

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I love it❤❤❤❤❤

"I have nothing bad to say I wish there were more books like this "

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Awesome

"Good story"

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