Back to Story
What is your opinion?
Great story.
"The ending was frustrating. Mostly because I couldn't figure out who was wrong and was looking for an answer, but I think that was intentional. Looking back I still can't figure out which side was wrong. I think it really captures how people freak out and choose the safe path at the first sign of trouble though."
Good
"Great idea for a short story or novella, grammar and spelling could do with a once over but generally great "
