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Amazing

"I loved every single part of it, but it ended sooner I expected. I thought there will be more about Andy and Macon. Hope there'll be more! I wanna know what comes next. Great for people like me who like to read, especially about people your age and their problems. Keep writing! ;)"

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"I love love love this story! I was intrigued from the first chapter, it's just so good. I love how Andrea is so interesting and could honest to God be a real person and that in itself made me want to keep reading. I like how Macon works in a bakery and the way his name rhymes with the word bacon( at least the way I pronounce it). I also was really happy that music was a present factor in this book and I love the concept of having a bucket list and the way it inspired her to start living and to start taking chances instead of always second guessing her decisions. There's also the type of things that Andy( Andrea) decides to put on her bucket list. Things like kissing a stranger and getting stuck somewhere, rather than things like visiting the wonders of the world or something else of the sort. They're just things that she wants to do. Of course there's Will. Will, the idiotic, occasionally stoned, and music loving best friend. I loved his character as well as Macon and honestly all the characters leave such an impression. I can't wait to see what this author decides to next and to see how this book will end. :) "

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so good!

"I read this story in one breath and couldn't lay my phone down. It's kind of a love story but even in chapter 16 you'll fail looking for cheesy elements. And if there are some kitschy scenes they're well placed and I enjoyed reading them. The characters are relateable and realistic and only one character (Will) perhaps is a bit of a stereotype. The plot is well thought and the language used fits the setting and characters. Just one expression caught my eye after reading it throughout the story: the main characters are referred to as 'kids' but they are 19-21 years old. So I feel like that doesn't fit but somehow it works for the story. Please continue writing and publishing this story, I'm hooked!!! :)"

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Good story

"After reading do many badly written (or plotted) stories, this one was very refreshing. The characters are believable, the plot good, the writing style excellent, and the humor unending. I look forward to reading more in the future. "

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It keeps getting better.

"When i started reading this, it was okay-good. But then i felt like many of the details were unnecessarily lengthened and in those times i felt like not finishing till the end. But it gets better. Just hang in there. I wished the author had expanded Andrea's social circle a bit (too small of a social circle for someone in college ,atleast in my opinion), and i also wished there were more details about Andrea's personal life, especially the past. If it were to be published, I'd buy it."

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