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During The Time Just Before Christmas Day

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Summary

When it is the coldest part of the year, does everything all around you many times has a really low temperature, and are all things that you see across the land have both pine trees and snow, and is there an imaginary person who has both a beard of white and a coat of red, and do little kids all over the place hear stories from other people about how he has gifts for them to open on Christmas Day, and do deer pull his sleigh, and within the Big Apple, is there a truly special building where Christians can worship, and during the time just before Christmas Day, do the voices of Heaven's Helpers bring tears to our eyes, and do candles sail up to the sky, and white points of light sail up the sky, and do pure white points of light fall to the ground like soft feathers?

Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1

When it is the coldest time of the year,

Everything all around me many times has a really low temperature.

All the things the things that I see across the land have both pine trees and snow.

There is an imaginary person who has both a beard of white and a coat of red.

Little kids all over the place hear stories from people about how he has gifts for them to open on Christmas Day.

He has deer that pull his sleigh.

Within the Big Apple,

There is a truly special building where Christian can worship.

During this time just before Christmas Day,

The voices of Heaven’s Helper’s bring tears to our eyes.

Candles sail up to the sky.

Pure white points of light fall to the ground like soft feathers.

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