What is your opinion?
Wolf instints
"Very good, is theire more!"
Good quick read.
"I found this story very intriguing and confusing at the same time. I really like the overall idea of the story and the characters, but there needs to be some more exposition about certain features and events that occur. Not that i want the happenings just spelled out for me but the story would benefit from more explanation about this world and what is happening. Most of this is dialogue which i usually find difficult to fallow in large consecutive amounts, but they are written well enough that i was able to fallow along easily. It is a fast paced story, and that's exactly what i was looking for. But again wouldn't have minded if it was slightly longer for it to accommodate more exposition. So overall i really enjoyed the story but think i could have some improvements, but with an open ending there is always a chance for a sequel."
Wolf Instincts
"I’m sure this could be a great story but it’s very rushed and confusing. Even at the end I have no idea what actually happened! With some work it could be a very good, different, original story. It just needs more in depth information, a few things are brushed over as if the reader should already have the knowledge of what you’re talking about when really we have no clue!! Also maybe a discussion about how packs/ clans work in your story could help, why be sent back to humans and yet only come in contact with different animals? What was the aim of being sent off? How would that prove anything to the pack? And maybe not such a rushed beginning with such a huge time leap, we have no clue what really happened except… bam she’s a wolf now 🤷♀️ I’d love to read it again if you were to write it differently as i would love to understand! Sorry for all the pointers lol, it was ok I’m just confused but excited because I’m sure it would be a great story if I was in your head! But congratulations on a good starting place 😍 "
