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Good hook

"Great hook to catch reader attention. loved to see whats next!"

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Wow!

"The main character was so spunky! The way she narrated made her the story really enjoyable to read. I also liked how vividly you described her werewolf transformation. I hope to see more stories about her soon."

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Eye brows In geosynchronous orbit.

"I loved this work. I usually have a hard time finding good humor stories. As they are either really flat, carried to far, or in extremely poor taste. This story had me hooked as soon as she walked through the door. and it seemed to just get better as it went."

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