What is your opinion?
AMAZING
"I loved it thatβs it and thatβs all!"
Book
"Really gd book"
The forgotten child
"I love that the story is about older people also having hope and a future. "
The forgotten child
"Itβs amazing read! I enjoyed a lot"
Bitch
"Bitch I want her to die"
The forgotten child
"Simply brilliant story with great characters and well worth a read for anyone. "
The forgotten child
"A liked the plot of the story very much. It actualy made me cry BUT Idont like that it has a short ending . It feels like its missing something but over all i love it . Just the ending needs a little fixng"
Loved it
"I loved the book :) thank u author for writing this awsome book, I hope u can do some more chapters to this book later on about the new baby and the new dynamics of family of three and if trevor gets better with his therapy"
The forgotten child
"I'm loving it very much. Brilliant and amazing story. Brilliant author. Keep up the good work. Thanks for sharing your story. Looking forward to more amazing stories. πππππππππ"
the forgotten child
"this book is so addicting ."
Love it
"Great book love the characters"
The Forgotten Child
"This story was very emotional, but very satisfying. I loved the plot and the characters but I hated one of them.... ehem you know who. But anyways, I totally recommend this story!!!!!! β€οΈ"
Especially hot
"This book is by far one of the best that I have read on here. I have read books with the same feel to it outside of inkitt and I truly think this has potential. If I were a publisher and not just a reader, I would put it out there in a heartbeat. In my opinion, it would be nice if there were more people like the characters in the story. More men like that. Even with the temper. And it ain't just my teenage hormones, its the fact that most stories like this have been turned into fiction instead of non. The prospect of the conniving and greed filled woman is more likely than that kind of love. But never the less, its still heart warming to think people still believe or at least wish for it enough to write about it. Thank you author."
The Forgotten Chil
"Great story so far. I love how this book is bringing autism to life. And love how everything flows and goes together. Each chapter keeps me wanting to read more.."
Very nice story
"Enjoyed reading it.."
The Forgotten Child
"I'm confused π I don't know whether I like this story or I hate it. At first, I was drawn to the children part of the story - moreover, one of them was autist which I didn't encounter much in romantic stories, so I was hooked almost instantly π Almost at once we see a spineless heroine who can't even stand up for her child - no alimony, really? π - let alone for herself - yeah, let's let that good-for-nothing ex-husband of hers to have a comfy life while she deals with everything regarding separation. Totally not cool and irritating to read about. Then we see a seeming mucho man who is so wonderful that our knickers go wet. But later it is obvious that he is as spineless as his female counterpart. He sees his runaway wife with another man and not only he doesn't divorce her but for two years he is supporting her financially in her luxurious lifestyle. So much for a muchoπ But that's not it, he also is not the sharpest tool in the box. When his wife comes back, he lets her and doesn't even try (immediately) to gather the case against her in order to get easy divorce - he had all the reasons for that. No, he allows her to rule the parade, blackmail him, and gives her money all the while she is ruining all the progress they've achieved with his son. Just great! Don't get me wrong, I don't need perfect characters who can do no wrong - far from it. But there are characters with flaws and mistakes and there are downright dumb behaviours. Your characters' actions don't add up to the personalities you want us to believe they have. It's especially true for Brad. He has a solid case against his wife and all the chances to win but he lets her go and with money. Cool! π He could have had a full custody without giving her even MORE money - he just enabled her irresponsibility once more. Sorry to say, but your main characters are rather poorly written π I liked your idea and general plot - though not its development. I enjoyed your writing style and that you care about your grammar - thet were really goodπ It was a decent story with inconsistent characters though I had nice time reading it. Good luck with your writing! π "
