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Excellent

"No words i have read it so many times"

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SIMPLEMENTE AMOR

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With you... Hamesha

"Great Story!"

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With you..... "Hanesha"

"I really like the plot, character, story and their words. But at some places, I was confuse about who is actually talking. Otherwise good work. More power to your pen!"

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Awesome. !!!!

"I like the way Arnav react.... Don't like why the other don't try to make sure is A bhi is Arnavs son The story is really nice"

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Ravhel

"Just so cross at that stupid Anjali hopes she comes around soon"

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Lost Love

"What a beautiful story, from the beginning to the end. Enjoyed every chapter. Will definitely recommend this story. "

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Nice work

"Nice piece of work. "

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Hamesha

"I really liked your story. The way you make khushi strong and she believe in Arnav when even his family doesn't support him. She really supports her husband and Arnav, he is such a sweetheart, I really love this Arnav. The way he helped khushi in overcome her insecurities and changes he brought in her. I love this Aakash and payal also. They both are understanding and speak for their right not that silent one. But one question I really didn't understand why you changed Aarav's name to Abhi?? 🤔🤔"

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Good

"I likedvit very much "

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I love it

"Beautiful story"

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Excellent work 👌👍

"Excellent work 👌👍"

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Arnav kushi

"Very gud reading"

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Ganesha

"Superb written superb story awesome ending "

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With you hamesha

"Really lovely "

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With you hamesha

"Loved this story to the core.. Keep writing more with different plots"

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With you... Hamesha

"A very beautiful story.... Loved it...."

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a.w.s.o.m.e !!!!!!

"a.w.s.o.m.e !!!!!! not other words are necessary !!!!!!"

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Fabulous

"Story is awesome no word to describe. Each and every emotions and scene pen down Fabulously."

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Superb

"She has amazing writing skills, I love her each and every story. I followed her from long time. In short I’m addicted to her stories"

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