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I Prize The Sea Without End

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Summary

When the sun disappears out of sight from the sky, and I can not see it any longer, what do I prize, and what do I respect, and what do I value, and what do I appreciate, and is it enjoyable here, and does it give me pleasure, and do I get enjoyment from it, and is it a diversion, and does it attract my attention away from the unpleasant things I think about, and do I go along a road that leads me away from those unpleasant things so that I am not around them anymore, and do I prize it without end, and do I break loose from Planet Earth, and do I also break loose from things that give me pain in my mind, and do I break loose from things that make me upset, and do I break loose from things that ruin my calm, and do I feel anxiety here, and do I break loose from things that make me feel uncomfortable, and is it silent when I come here, and are the colors of the sky both dark lavender and orange, and is there a golden lighthouse in the distance?

Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

Chapter 1

When the sun disappears out of sight from the sky,

And I can not see it any longer,

I prize the sea.

I respect the sea.

I value the sea.

I appreciate the sea.

It is enjoyable here.

It gives me pleasure.

It is a diversion.

It attracts my attention away from the unpleasant things I think about.

I go along a road that leads me away from those unpleasant things so that I am not around them anymore.

I prize the sea without end.

I break loose from Planet Earth.

I also break loose from things that give me pain in my mind.

I break loose from things that make me upset.

I break loose from things that ruin my calm.

I do not feel anxiety here.

I break loose from things that make me feel uncomfortable.

It is silent when I come here.

The colors of the sky are both dark lavender and orange.

There is a golden lighthouse in the distance.

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I walk by the sea a lot. Every mood seems to find an echo there. I always return home feeling refreshed and reinvigorated - body and mind.

8 years

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