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Love it

"This book is so good. Got me all over the place with my feelings."

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Nice

"Great storyline"

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Great

"I love this story plot so much. It's great! "

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Love it

"Loved it but update?"

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Best

"Great story but pls update"

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Master [s.m]

"When I first started reading this book on wattpad, my first thoughts were:Ugh, this is just gonna be another one of these sex slave stories. I hated the first few chapters, either way I decided to read more in hope that they would slowly turn out to be better. What I can say is that this story has truly evolved, and that your writing skills has improved since the first chapters. After I've read the story for a while, I just couldn't get enough. I would always swear (excuse myself) when I reached the last chapter, espeacially the first time😂 And I would always shout:YESS THANK YOU THANK YOU I LOVE YOU" When ever a new chapter came out. I can write some more but I don't want this to be too long. "

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love it

"❤️❤️ finished this book in 1 day! can’t wait for the update!"

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Master s.m.

"Amazing I just wish the chapters were longer and more details and more sex scenes to be more realistic. I wish each chapter was more realistic.( not saying they’re bad so please don’t take this as criticism or hate) because I genuinely love this book!!💗💗"

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Master [s.m]

"Updates are really late, it's such a good book and to be waiting weeks for a new update is such a shame, no other problems just the amount of time. Writing style is absolutely amazing, and I can actually feel like the character with how it's been written"

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Amazing

"It’s absolutely amazing like i fee like I’m in the story this is by far the best book I have ever read the author uses so many details that help you imagine what’s going on in the story it’s just a great job overall "

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Master [s.m]

"Good good good good good good luck on the game next year omg omg was the day you got your own car yet so I don’t want you guys to get a hold you and I get it right that’s what you wanna is it is going out to you get my "

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Beautiful

"Beautifully written and I love it. It’s so loving and beautiful to see them making love the way you wrote it. I can’t stop reading this and you made this seem so real. It’s such a beautiful and amazing love scene to read everytime. Insanely gorgeous and beautiful to read and to imagine. As unholy as it is😂"

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Master

"I can’t wait for the next chapter like 😭😭😭. Weieuejuenedndksh. I’m sitting on the edge just waiting for chapter 53. I can’t take to wait anymore. I just need it. "

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Best book ever!!!!! ❤️❤️❤️👌👌

"Best book out there. Freakin awesome ❤️❤️👌👌"

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THIS BOOK IS JUST EVERYTHING.

"I DON'T HAVE WORDS TO DESCRIBE THIS BOOK WKXJSKD IT'S JUST AWESOME😭♥😭♥"

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Master

"One of my favorite books😍😍"

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Best book

"This is one of the best books I've ever read. I love the way you describe things and how emotional you can write and all in the other states of feeling. It just amazing and I can't put it in words. "

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Best book ive read in my life

"This was so good i enjoyed it so much i couldn't get my eyes of my phone😂 i do wish you could post more and make the chapters longer but im sure you are very busy like most of us but overall this book was amazing "

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I love it!

"I love this book! It has such a good plot, and you're writing skills are on point! I do wish that you would post more often, but I understand that you are probably busy with life😂 I also wish that the chapters were longer... but anyways, I love this book! 5 stars on everything!"

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I love it

"I have transferred from wattpad to inkitt like most of the people reading your story and its just so amazing. the only thing i would like to ask/recommend is for you to try to publish a minimum of once a week but thank you for the amazing story."

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