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Totally Depressed

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Summary

This poem is about a woman who feels lonely and is depressed totally.She's bullied by the people around her and finally decides to end up her life. This poem is about a woman who feels lonely and is depressed totally.She's bullied by the people around her and finally decides to end up her life.

Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1

She stood at the edge of the building

Feeling bored at the fake people guilding.

With the intense pain,fear and sadness

In an inbuilt world of complete darkness.

Forward or backward step is her only choice

Because the people around,never cared her voice.

They made her fall into a world of depression

Without allowing her to speak out a question.

With the thoughts of past , killing her inside

She tried to show a fake smile outside.

She also strived to make her life adorned

But everyone bullied and made her scorned.

With all the tears,rolling down her pale cheeks

She’s ready to drop from the building on peaks.

She counted three,one..... two..... three......

And jumped off the building,just to become free.

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