My Dark Walk by Bhavana Vutla at Inkitt
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My Dark Walk

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Summary

This poem is related to some introverts who feel lonely. The fear,the pain and the loneliness they experience and the way they overcome these in their life is described in here. Hope you'll enjoy it. This poem is related to some introverts who feel lonely. The fear,the pain and the loneliness they experience and the way they overcome these in their life is described in here. An 18-year old girl who always feels lonely just after she lost her family, pretends to walk in a dark street . Her every step forward, increases the fear in her . There's an ' inside her ' who is not familiar to the outside world. Though she smiles at everyone at every moment outside, the fear and the pain haunts her inside all the time.She always thinks 'silence' as her biggest enemy..... She always tried to hide her pain since she doesn't like others showing sympathy for some reason. She then started walking through a lane, biting her chain just like a little kid, looking all over and makes her every step possible forward . She faces many distressing people in her way The only devil she wants to fight with at this particular moment is the 'fear'. So, she tried harder and harder and started moving forward gaining all the strength of a country soldier. keeping all the worries aside and succeeded in making her biggest move finally.........., Hope you'll enjoy it.. Have a nice day all

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Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
5.0 1 review
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1

"Hiding the fear, hiding the pain

Hiding the tears that fall like rain.

Saying I’m ok, though I’m not

And maintained a smile without being caught....

Walking in the lane, biting my chain

I tried to move forward again.

But what scared me is the terrible thought

Of the silence that made me lastly to trot....

Harder and harder I tried to gain

The courage and strength like a country swain.

The fear in me was finally fought

And I moved ahead without any thought......."

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