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What is your opinion?
Captivating
"This is a very interesting, captivating story! I love the bounce between high school girl and fantasy world. Great story"
Interesting so far!!
"I’m really liking this so far! Such an intriguing concept of having twins separated at birth, it gives me Star Wars vibes a bit but with more of a fantasy twist. I noticed a few run on sentences here and there, but it was minor in the grand scheme of things-the only reason I notice it is because I’m super bad for it in my own writing. Overall great job so far, can’t wait to see where the story goes! :) "
Pretty Good
"It is a pretty good story, although there are some grammar issues."
