Not that bad.

"First of all, I'm sorry for my bad English. This story has many author notes, and readers may not need those. There are many FILLER scenes -like before the wedding- But despite that, this story's plot is too fast. Maybe because it's kind of focused on conversations. The author needs to explore more about the details of the scenes, the feelings of the characters, so this story won't need those "minutes later". The author just needs to read more great stories and takes time to learn. It would be a better story. Thankyou for the story. I love Namjoon."