What is your opinion?
Lovely
"This was lovely to read. I enjoyed this immensely and loved your take on how Snape survived, among other things... (I don't want to give out spoilers.) The slow build up of emotions and becoming friends with Potter and Granger were done well. There are a few messed up words and/or sentences where you started to write something but changed and didn't erase part of what was written previously. It did not subtract from the story though because it was fine if it had been written either way. Other than that, lovely feel good story that I binged since yesterday "
Charming Story
"This story was very charming. It had a unique premise with the circumstances surrounding Snape's survival. Despite taking place during "8th Year," this was really not a typical 8th Year fic.. Here, Hermione and Snape, through some initial external pressure, became friends quite organically, and were mostly equals from the onset.. Their progression from being friends to falling in love with each other progressed slowly and quite realistically. This was a nice feel-good romantic story and I enjoyed reading it."
Lacking in crucial elements
"This was a very a very armature piece. The grammar and flow was off, reminiscent of my own writings at age 13, in fact, The story line was shallow, as were the characters, which were poorly pirated from Harry Potter, that is to say it did not hold my interest and the ending was weak."
