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In Fields That Were the Universe

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Summary

Someday, my friend, you too will be forbidden to come back here. A collection of poems about the tail end of growing up, the last vestiges of youth and learning how to navigate what appears to be a boundless future.

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8yrs ago
Chapters
1
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Age Rating
13+

In Fields That Were the Universe

We stood amidst the morning mist

Where freedom lay revealed

We conquered hay-bale mountaintops

We Titans of the Fields

Each summer meant adventures spent

Each future still unknown

In fields that were the universe

In worlds that were our own

Our lives progressed, we less and less

Explored the clouded fields

The magic wouldn’t show itself

Its dwelling lay concealed

Yet still we’re drawn to misty dawns

Where wonders yet exist

In fields that were the universe

In worlds we sorely miss

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