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Warfare of the Brain

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Summary

A poetry book about the thoughts and feelings of a youth just trying to make it in the world.

Genre
Poetry/Other
Author
Flaw
Status
Complete
Chapters
41
Rating
4.8 10 reviews
Age Rating
16+

To Be Pure

I wanted to write down exactly what I feel,

Everything that has been cooped up and locked away

Inside the deepest, darkest part of my soul,

But somehow the paper stayed empty


And I couldn’t have described it any better.


No.


This is what I am feeling now, I thought,

As I stared at the blank sheet.


White, a blanket of pure untainted white;

A white that seems to contain all the possible shades of colors

Blended into a color on its own,

But also a white that is as bare and plain

As a desert devoid of any living organisms.


I raised the pencil to the paper once again,

To write down my twisted thoughts;

Thoughts pregnant with emotion, with secrets, and with heaviness.


But I can’t do it.


To taint and stain the beauty of this blankness,

That carried more inspiration than I could ever summon,

With the color of my burdens seemed to feel like a crime.


I set the pencil down.

The clatter of plastic echoed throughout the silence.

The paper stays blank

And this blankness is exactly what I feel.

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Wow, not only is it a good idea to write about such a concept, also the way you implemented it is simply great. But I have to admit that only because of the last paragraph I was able to be pulled in like that. Without it, something important would be missing. Like that, it is perfect and truly powerful. Great work.

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Magnificent write up!

a year
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Your words hold a rare beauty graceful, moving, and unforgettable. They whisper potential, not just for readers to feel, but for the world to recognize. Behind the scenes, there’s a remarkable space where voices like yours quietly turn into both purpose and passive income, month after month. I won’t rush to explain it all here, but if your heart is open to something greater, I’d be truly honored to show you what’s possible.

a year

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