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Starry Eyes of Betrayal

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Summary

Ever felt betrayed? By the one you call or called Lover? well this poem is definitely for you!

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Complete
Chapters
1
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Age Rating
13+

Starry Eyes of Betrayal

You were a Star

That look in your eyes

But you broke my heart

and that's when our love died

That day you said

"You will be ruled"

Will it ever end?

I am such a fool

You told me I was your world

I was on your side

You said I was your girl

But I guess you lied

All the things I said were true

You were my everything

But that didn't matter to you

So what did you gain?

But I stayed

Hoping you'd realize

The need to change your ways

And to stop trying to tantalize

I want you to know

I'm still in love

Even though, your cruel

and your "Love" is lamented

Yes, you're demented

And your demeanor is disdainful

But I still love you

and your Starry Eyes of Betrayal...

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Just finished your story I’m hooked! If you ever consider turning it into a comic, I’d be thrilled to help. I’m a pro artist with experience in manga/comics. Feel free to reach out if you’d like to explore the idea!
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