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Book

"Very good book "

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Good

"Grammar errors"

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Love it!!!

"Love the plot but needs better fill in info in the beginning. It kinda just jumps and there's no detail, especially compared to the rest of it. "

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Mafia business

"Okay this had me crying "

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Mafia Business

"Amazing plz update soon"

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Mafia Business

"Great story and very human characters, casual murder as a business, made believable, keep writing, don't leave us hanging!"

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Very good

"This is a really good book i love it.. Keep up the good work"

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This is amazing I'm on the edge of my seat. I'm hoping that they can unite BOTH of the gangs to become one.

"This is amazing I'm has me on the edge of my seat. I'm hoping that they can unite BOTH gangs to become one. That would be the best for BOTH."

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Love this

"Loving this story so far"

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Good book!

"This is a good book just waiting for the update💕"

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Good

"Curious for the ending"

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Mafia Boss

"Love all the twist and turns"

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It was good book so far

"I love your book it is very good.. It mad me laugh and cry at time.. Hope to read more books of yours in the future "

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Okay

"It's okay so far"

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It's is good

"it is interesting to read.i am enjoying the book.hope to read more from you."

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Unknown

"I hate that I have to keep doing these things to continue to read a story that I am rather interested in. I usually dont keep track of the book name....I read what I enjoy....if I didnt like the story I wouldn't make it far enough to have to leave these danged reviews"

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