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Good

"The story was good i just expected it to be a bit longer to see wat happened to alvin when he ran away.i would recommend it to all readers and therefore i have rated it 5 stars "

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Awsome

"It was great and I'm one for constructive criticism so I will just say it was a good story had a good plot but the grammar needs to be brushed up and the story itself could be finished over all though it was good 👍"

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