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What is your opinion?
It was very creative
"I think u should go back and edit ur punctuation. Ur sentences are very long"
Priya the butterfly and Dawaili festival
"Need to work on punctuation. Great story."
Nice story
"I liked this story's plot which was very interesting. But there are some punctuation and grammar mistakes. It would make it even better if you could fix those. Good try!"
