Recluse

"The plot is good. I like the short story format, it leaves things to the readers imagination. I would recommend this story. Their are a few points for improvement. The story needs to longer and more, their is so much that can be done with the story. I would advise, if this is going to be continued then be careful of how you refer to the main character, sometimes he is referred to as ''young man'' and others times as ''he''. The way story lore information is given out needs improvement, but I like ambiguous vibe in moderation. For example the ambiguous nature is really interesting in terms of who is the escapee is really interesting, imagine if the main character being antisocial because of that. About character information and setting information you need to spend more time establishing it before a crisis comes. But overall I think this story is worth reading, I would really like to see more of this story, it has a spark."