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What is your opinion?

Darkness within

"It's good, but could do with more descriptive words, , maybe add a back story for Killian aswell..."

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Love it

"I realy love it. Can’t stop reading. You are very good. Even so you say it’s not your best work"

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Alpha killian

"Update when next chapters are ready w read enjoyed reading your book very much "

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Great read

"Twists and turns. Exciting and exhilarating! Must read"

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Alpha killian

"Love it. Im in my own world when reading"

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Killian and Aspen

"Is there going to be more"

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Alpha killian

"The best I've read so far "

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Jade

"I really like the difference this story is based on other wolf stories I read. I would really recommend this to a friend who also loves fantasy and love novels. Based on the unique plot is gave this novel a high rating "

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Alpha killian

"I love the way the story jumps point of views"

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Good

"I love the plot and twist i love the way every twist come.. And love the way she is but i personalky she should fight.againts his commands..she would felt difficulty in fighting through command she should won on the end proving she is stronger than any one else ."

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Killian

"Hope to read more love this so far "

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Yes

"Love the book very interesting "

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Killian

"On the edge, and cannot stop reading. Some of the twists are so unexpected but definitely worth reading it. "

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Alpha Killian

"I like this story, I am going to tell my family and friends about it. I love werewolf story's. "

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Alpha killian

"It is some hint else I do love it. It isn't a bad story. I like the twist. But I do want to find out who killed the 3 people from the pack"

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Kerri Burch

"I like the story "

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Alpha killan

"I loved the stories it bring alot to the imagination and the stories is very good would recommend it to any of my friends"

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Killains Alpha

"SHE'S DOING AWESOME.SHE JUST NEEDS MORE CONFIDENCE IN HERSELF "

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Tevi

"What in the beelzebob is going on"

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Killer

"Amzing, i loved it. If you have finished it i would be so happy"

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